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-- boobs do nothing for me, I want moustaches and chest hair.
MetalDog wrote:Usually I just feel relieved when it's done!
@Blerk
A better day, hopefully? You'll feel the celebration when you finish the yarn =D And a little bit of sad, probably, but mostly yay when it's done!
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-- boobs do nothing for me, I want moustaches and chest hair.
-- boobs do nothing for me, I want moustaches and chest hair.
MetalDog wrote:My apologies. I still owe you more overall feedback on the story.
Go Techno, you're almost there!
I'm hoping I can get a sprint on come friday, I'm at 42194 according to nano site.
Day 27
-- boobs do nothing for me, I want moustaches and chest hair.
Blerk wrote:Congrats Blerk, you writing machine beast you!
There's a whole other chapter to get up there too but I've not had a chance to even scan through it so I'll do that tomorrow (I need to throw a few comedy typos in to keep Salaman happy).
Salaman wrote:In my head, the 'compound' is a fenced off section of the town comprising the promenade area and just a few blocks 'inland'. This is a far larger area than they need, but this is just the initial stage of colonisation and eventually this whole section will be full of miners and specialists and what have you, and there's every intention of reopening the shops and facilities, etc. to service that community.
I was under the impression when they arrived at the eurhm ... housing blocks that it was a fairly small part of the town, sectioned off with fences (to keep them wild animals at bay and such) where they would live and have a mess hall and that's about it. The presence of guards at the gate and in the foyer of the living block at night als gave me the impression they were watched over when they are in this "compound".
They seem to be strolling around in a much larger area now, including a funfair, a square with a fountain,a library. More importantly. They seem to be all alone. No guards/soldiers nearby or in sight.
Did I miss something or have I misjudged the scale of things?
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GHOSTBUSTERS
TechnoHippy wrote:Well ... I got the guards surprise is because Misty got him assigned that cell. That much is obvious. I don't get why right before that it's made out as if Dan unwittingly gets himself assigned a cell in "general population" instead of "secure wing" by being dozy and answering one of the questions "wrong". Since Misty is manipulating the cell allocation I don't get the relevance of the bit before.
@Salaman
Misty setup Dan and put him in that cell, that's why the guard looked surprised atthe cell allocation. I should make that more obvious.
TechnoHippy wrote:Aaaah that does make sense. I was thinking of the bot net of just a bunch of computers worldwide infected by a trojan and under the control of the maffia. If she takes control, they're shut out and can't do anything. They can come break your fingers since they'll be made but Misty is exempt from that treatment. =)
The demon could seize the bot-net, but would then have the Russian mob after it. While they don't know what they're dealing with, they do know where the computers are and have some handy hackers of their own. I probably need to explain why the demon is loathe to take them on (yet).
:]:]:]:]
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Carbon_Altered wrote:Brilliant.
Chapter 24: Ostrich v Titan
I'm out the next two evenings so will be validating it all tonight, feels a bit odd not to have totally finished though.
-- boobs do nothing for me, I want moustaches and chest hair.
Why look, it's a blog:
http://www.edwardlaven.blogspot.co.uk
Blerk wrote:Makes sense. I had a look at the section where they arrive again to see what clues there are as I may have just missed them.
In my head, the 'compound' is a fenced off section of the town comprising the promenade area and just a few blocks 'inland'. This is a far larger area than they need, but this is just the initial stage of colonisation and eventually this whole section will be full of miners and specialists and what have you, and there's every intention of reopening the shops and facilities, etc. to service that community.
As it stands, the few hundred people who are already there are 'rattling around' a bit and there aren't nearly enough military personnel to effectively cover the whole compound (and the base), hence the scientists being restricted to their building after curfew. So the military claims, anyway!
I obviously need to make this clearer, so I'll flag it for the edit.
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