Yaaay!
Good long chapter.
Typos:
They were the same eyes that I had seen in the alleyway back in the , but also the same eyes that had just a few moments before been crouched in the road, snarling and preparing to tear me to pieces. Animal eyes.
Be safe,” she said warmly, her tone very different to almost military air she had carried just a few seconds earlier.
The terrain had proved less challenging that I had expected and even without Kurt’s eyesight advantage we had little trouble making our way across the fields.
-> i was a bit confused here. They have Kurt's eyesight advantage. Or should it "we would have had" or even "i had little trouble"?
Good long chapter.
Typos:
They were the same eyes that I had seen in the alleyway back in the , but also the same eyes that had just a few moments before been crouched in the road, snarling and preparing to tear me to pieces. Animal eyes.
Be safe,” she said warmly, her tone very different to almost military air she had carried just a few seconds earlier.
The terrain had proved less challenging that I had expected and even without Kurt’s eyesight advantage we had little trouble making our way across the fields.
-> i was a bit confused here. They have Kurt's eyesight advantage. Or should it "we would have had" or even "i had little trouble"?
