@TechnoHippy Thanks for your thoughts! I'm glad it's an easy read, I can see where you're coming from with the clichés - it certainly sticks to a formula, but I'll see if I can make it less pronounced when it gets edited.
Haven't had a chance to read any more of yours yet, will let you know as I do.
Haven't had a chance to read any more of yours yet, will let you know as I do.
