#10020328, By sunjumper Return of the Revenge of NaNoWriMo '13

  • sunjumper 2 Dec 2013 00:00:09 2,988 posts
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    @BillCityfingers
    That's often the case which just drives the point home, how that if you want to write something you have to sit down and write something. It realy is the best strategy to start out.

    @MetalDog
    You are right about that MD. I will have to tweak that scene later. It looked plausible enough when I wrote it and my heart is filled with evil ugly violence, but you are right, it's the wrong action for the wrong person. Changing it a bit will help with the flow and keep the character more grounded.

    Edited by sunjumper at 16:10:32 02-12-2013
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