Thanks for the feed back!
That dickhead was the stupid spellchecker... It for some reason really hat to pull that dick apart from the head. Who knows maybe it's prude?
I need to get the setting a dude on fire out of there then.
Lane is not supposed to be a bad guy.
The kicking the crap out of the guy who threatened to kill her was a reaction to pent up fear and being constantly threatened by others with death. It wasn't torture. There was no ulterior motive to it.
It should be captain Idris who should look more suspicious to you.
The plans of the guys that attacked them will soon be unveiled.
Edited by sunjumper at 14:32:09 01-12-2013
#10019525, By sunjumper Return of the Revenge of NaNoWriMo '13
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