Writing in progress. |
Yesterday was a shitty fucking shit day. So I ignored my writing duties for once. Today I am back typing away. The new chapter is surprisingly hard to write.
16590 words in the end.
No update tonight. Either tomorrow or Monday.
Now for some (quick?) feedback
A.S. (like a P.S. but before the text) I almost forgot about the heart-wood. The part of the tree that is still alive is the outermost layer under the bark. The parts of the stem that lay deeper inside the tree are quite dead. As long as you leave the outer parts intact the tree will live happily ever after. You'll see hollow trees that are still alive and sprouting ever so often, plus squirrels and birds make their comfy homes inside trees without killing them. Nerdy detail, the reason the hole in the tree that Kim cut is that of a long vertical oval is to minimise the damage done to the living parts of the tree.
For me Polish and Russian sound rather similar. For which I have been declared a deaf idiot by both Russians and Poles.
Flats well insulated from sound?!? What a glorious future!
Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy.
Looks like a solid lead right here.
I wonder how you can actually stop writing here, have you no heart for your readers?
Well done. The flow of the chapter is a bit slow, but it does work well with the end of it.
#9213016, By sunjumper National Novel Writing Month 2012
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