TechnoHippy wrote:Thanks for the feedback.
Could it be that you missed update 14? That would explain why the chapter is so hard to get into.
If not what was hard to understand?
That way I can clear that up during editing.
#9209602, By sunjumper National Novel Writing Month 2012
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